Thoughts from the dome

Sometimes i sit alone
I go inside my secret dome
Thinking of how much time we have missed

My soul aching for your affection
28 years and still all this complexion
For true love is no easy road but our paths finally crossed
Melting away my frost
You made it through the mist and the fog

Alas all is not what it seems
I'm falling apart at the seams
Your love belongs to another
My heart grows colder and colder

I sit alone inside my secret dome thinking of how we can have a place to call home.
Through dreams and meditation
Nothing can change your direction
Nothing can bring me your affection

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Unrequited affections can be a bummer – especially when you believe you have the ‘ONE’! You have expressively conveyed the feelings and emotions of this through a poetic format very nicely!
Note: Just an observation – ‘Atlas’ all is not what it seems @ - should it read ‘Alas’ … :-)

[Ballpark Frank]

This is such a sad situation, but the writing is so skillful I forgot how much I can identify with the heartbreak. Nice!

[MoonChild]

Thank you for reading my poem! I'm glad you liked it :)

[emmajoy]

Sadness personified, DDee... such a dark, deeply felt stream of thought and seemingly true. Perhaps your heart and mind are at odds: the meter's a little erratic.. irregular weeping heartbeats maybe?

Sadly memorable. Hope to read some happy words from you... will return.

[MoonChild]

Thank you for reading, I do like my poetry to be dark, I've never been able to write it any other way.

[emmajoy]

You and your words shadow each other's emotions.. tis how it should be.. as long as you support each other. x

[MoonChild]

Thank you

[Tony Jordan]

I'm trying to work out the significance of the extra long line - in the grand scheme of the whole, but nevermind...
I think we can all relate to the one that got away.
:))

[MoonChild]

Thanks for stopping by and reading, I hope you liked it.

[Tony Jordan]

I did, as much as anyone who can relate can, I did.
:))

[MoonChild]

Ah good - thanks again

[Tha Wind AKA VERBAL OX]

Hope that frost on your heart was just a fraction of a moment of time.

[MoonChild]

Thanks for reading, deep wounds take a long time to heal

[Serendipity Planet]

sad poetry , but very beautiful and emotional

[MoonChild]

Thanks for reading