A masterpiece

I know you have never loved me
You lied from the start
But your lies where so beautiful
A work of art
So step back and revel in your masterpiece
Watching as I fall apart
Piece by piece

Reviews

[Relic]

Nuff said in my opinion. It expresses a meaning through a metaphor that puts it into a perspective the reader can fully understand, therefore knowing the writers feelings about the situation.

In other words...this is good. :)

[JackValor86]

i think the first 4 lines are great but also that you could have taken this alot further down the road