Hilarious Hero

Diego, an optimist
Readily believes in human flight.
Geared up for flight.
A hero in his right.
Unstopped tonight,
Flees to his mountain side.

Assaults his mountain top.
Sighting his world through a box,
Spreads his Kent cape.
Agrees to dive in.
Diego, 3, flies from his mountain chair,
Watching his model swoop the world.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Stephen]

Perfect! I love the rhythmic style...I was loosen up my foots when I was reading this bouncing beat.
Keep writing, now after reading this, am really curious to read your new 2014 stuffs if you do drop.

[Olufix]

Stephen, thanks a lot. Tell you what, because of your review, you'll be the first to see what new poems I've prepared for 2014.

[Stephen]

My pleasure, Olufix...hope to read your new stuffs soon cause am not sure for how long am on this site. My wishes're with you, buddy.
Your cool at writing!

[Stephen]

My pleasure, Olufix...hope to read your new stuffs soon cause am not sure for how long am on this site. My wishes're with you, buddy.
Your cool at writing!

[Olufix]

Thanks a lot man. You'll see them by Monday.

[Stephen]

Welcome! Glad to know!
I'd surely try to be on your pages soon before leaving.

All the best!

[Olufix]

Thanks. Copy that.

[bobc]

O...nice effort here. I could see the active imagination of a 3-year old vividly in this one...hope that was your intention. IMO only, the flow could be smoothed out a little. As presented, it is a charming little poem. Thanx for posting...bobc

[Olufix]

Yes Bob, it represents the imagination of a 3-year old.
Thanks for the tip, appreciation and review.