Angel

I've met a true angel,

and i was the one who fell.

I see her in my dreams, 

I'm on my knees.

I talk to her everyday,

but most of the time i don't know what to say.

I... I love her and i know it sounds petty,

but she's cute and makes me happy.

she's beautiful and amazing,

sometimes she's simply dazing.

I can't believe she's mine,

her colorful personality shines,

even if it's only with me at times.

she helps keep me together so much,

and for once i'm stimulated by touch.

I wish i could help her more, 

but my anxiety keeps me to the floor.

I think it's time to meet her through the door.

Author's Note

this was my first poem in a while so don't be to critical about it please it's a warm up. but don't sugar coat it either though please i'd like to better my writing. thanks

Reviews

[Hope Rose]

This is actually really good. I like it a lot.

[Damion Kirksey]

Thank you.

[Hope Rose]

You're very welcom

[Damion Kirksey]

:) ,

[Hope Rose]

:) ,

[Damion Kirksey]

Lol. .

[Hope Rose]

Hmm? .

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

I think this poem is very sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like it, keep up the good work!!!:):):)

[Damion Kirksey]

Thank you so much :)

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

your welcome, I am saying the truth when I say keep up the good work, :)

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

do you have any new poems????????

[Damion Kirksey]

One yeah check my profile

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

okay will do

[Immoral Epidemik]

That's really good man, I look forward to reading more

[Damion Kirksey]

Thanks

[Firebird]

I like that, particularly the first few lines. Keep it up! :-)

[Damion Kirksey]

Thank you :)