In the Night

Inspired by night-blindness

Enraptured by the starlight

Telling the moon my heart's wish

And praying for my blurred sight.

 

To clear the envious clouds

Gentle breeze, blow them away

Pure bliss waits under shrouds

Your transience enters the fray.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. :-)

Reviews

[ravenjess]

pretty pretty ^^ enraptured by the starlight.......I like this line alot!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Yay, you finally posted a poem! :-)

I just love this poem. It's pure and simple, with beautiful expressions. I love every line. These words will linger in my mind for a while.