Dandelions are People too

a poem in 7 lines, atomically correct.

I am an atom,

circling for all time.

Today I am Dylan,

tomorrow a dandelion,

the next a drink of tea.

No matter how you spin it, 

you'll never be done with me.

.   .   .

Author's Note

a penny for your thoughts ...

Reviews

[emmajoy]

So cleverly created.. metrically fine.. a lesson to this blatherer..

[Dylan Macadham]

Wow, you dug deep in my list for this one!
Thanks :)
Now to one of yours ...

[emmajoy]

Your 12 lines were recommended to me because my poetry usually ends up as tomes! :)

[Dylan Macadham]

Wrong! I just reviewed you, I liked it :) and definitely not too long!

[DiMar4u]

This was perfect. Succinct. Steeped (hehe) with meaning and profound truth.