BeeEss!

A Tongue-in-Cheek Verse in 11 Lines

Why oh why,

has the noble Bull,

been so maliciously aligned,

with Man’s sins,

 of hyperbole?

And the defecating chicken,

our provider of breakfast fare,

maligned so disrespectfully,

as Coward of cowards,

this the fowlest cut of all,

if you ask me.

(: Dedicated to my friend Chris :)

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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

You are a witty geezer writing about farm animals :) Defecating chickens eh? Very fowl indeed. And dedicated to me. I am touched. And I am not bull essing either:)


Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

You're welcome, pal, all part of my mission to clean up Male-kind's image :)
... geezer ???read moreYou're welcome, pal, all part of my mission to clean up Male-kind's image :)
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haha, Dylan

[Dylan Macadham]

Ah Yes! upside-down like Superman's Bizarro World or a Seinfeld episode :)
... or, barleygirl Planet! You write it, I'll read it! :D

[barleygirl]

This makes me want to write a story by choosing characters where all our constant everyday assumptions are turned upside down (((HUGS)))

[Dylan Macadham]

Resending this, not sure you got it :)
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Ah Yes! upside-down like Superman's Bizarro World or a Seinfeld episode :)
... or, barleygirl Planet! You write it, I'll read it! :D

[barleygirl]

Thank you for resending. I did see it in my newsfeed, so I clicked on it, even without notification. I'm feeling dull in the head (chronic pain), so I can't jump on your challenge at this moment, but I'm still thinking on it! Thanks for your spirited mojo for inspiration!

[Dylan Macadham]

Sorry you are not feeling well :(
Wasnt rushing you, it showed up on my end looking like it had not been sent, thats all :))