Beware a Wind ...

a Haiku poem in 3 lines

My mom always said,

beware a wind that whistles,

and kettles that don't.

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Haiku: Japanese poem of 17 syllables in 3 lines of 5, 7 & 5, 

including images of the natural world

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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I reckon your mum was wise. A kettle that never boils ain't good enough for making a decent brew and a wind that whistles is up to no good for sure. The whistles turn to screeches, howls and before you know where you are you got a hurricane on your doorstep. An interesting and visual Haiku. Well thought out Dylan.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Chris! :)
Just between you & me, pal, my mother, nor anyone else I know of ever said these 12 syllables, haha ...Thank Goodness I've kept my artistic license current.

[Chris Shaw]

What a tease you are. There was I giving you the benefit of doubt :)

[Dylan Macadham]

Yes, a tease & a scalawag, I am :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

That’s so good
I love that you have incorporated so easily your mothers saying
That’s so nice 👍

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks again Julie, I'm looking forward to reading you, soon as my evening paperwork is wrapped up.