Unbeknownst ...

a Verse in 12 lines

Ever wonder

 if there are Two of You?

One Here, One There,

Each unbeknownst

 to the Other,

On one path,

Traveling There,

Traveling Here,

Perhaps to meet,

 Perhaps to join,

Perhaps to continue,

 Each to whence You came.

.   .   .

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

What a thought. I just asked my other half, if there could ever be two of me. He didn't even pause to respond. One is more than enough, he said. :) Of course if I crossed paths with another me, I would like her instantly. She couldn't hide her secrets from me. I would know exactly what she was thinking. We would have a totally honest relationship:) Where do you get all these little flights of fancy from? Do they come to you as you soak in a bath or stare at the midnight sky. I wonder?

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Funny & clever of you, liking your OtherSelf because you'd have a totally honest relationship :)
read moreFunny & clever of you, liking your OtherSelf because you'd have a totally honest relationship :)
And, your OtherHalf sounds like an honest bloke too,haha.
...I enter my ThinkSilly zone and a germ of an idea pops into my head. Then I sit at my desk, and at the magical intersection of my eyes, fingers, keyboard & screen, the rest flows, sometimes steadily, sometimes at lightning pace :))

[Chris Shaw]

You know if you could clone yourself, you'd always be in the company of others who share the same views, who like the same food, same holidays, whose politics and outlook on life are identical to your own. Whose views on spending money equal your own. Now wouldn't that make life one helluva lot easier. No strife!!

[Dylan Macadham]

Gotta admit it sounds kinda perfect, but here's my Question: If you could do it, would you? :)

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, once a year on my birthday. To make sure that no significant others could put the mockers on it :)

[Dylan Macadham]

haha, good answer!
"Mockers," great word! ...mind if I try it out here and see it it catches on? :)

[barleygirl]

You're way behind me, my friend. There are many of me. I can always blame it on being bipolar, but I believe we all have a fluid way of being that's ever-changing (((HUGS)))

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks bg,
or should I say thanks to all of you? :)
...I agree with your "fluid" tidbit.

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Wow , I've never thought about it till now, but it kinda reminds me of back to the future movie , how there are multiple me's and maybe they meet sometime to venture on a journey together...
Nice one Dylan:))
Kathy

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Kathy, love your comparison, All of your Me's on a journey together! Now write it!!! :D haha
Gotta go help a friend mend a fence now (Whoa! there's a poem!) and looking forward to reading one of your's in the morning :)

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Haha my mind's an empty canvas for now your funny comments will bust up an idea soon ,:))