Culmination

a Haiku poem in 3 lines

Anticipation,

more often than not, exceeds

its culmination.

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Haiku: Japanese poem of 17 syllables in 3 lines of 5, 7 & 5, 

including images of the natural world

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Author's Note

...does this conjure any images of the natural world ? haha

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

You got me climbing mountains here Dylan :) Slowly does it. I have to say reaching the summit did not disappoint. But there again I am an optimist. You know this Haiku took me in quite a few different directions. Wonderful what poetry can do. Happy Saturday.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Chris for your nice words, and for not mentioning I screwed up my syllable count. Just rewrote it. ...now I have to dash out the door and meet friends for lunch ...in anticipation :))

[barleygirl]

I seem to have kicked the bad habit of anticipation. Every day is just any old day now. Lots of times the culmination turns out better too (((HUGS)))

[Dylan Macadham]

wish I could kick anticipation too ...right in the old butt-ation! :)

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A very nice haiku Dylan. I so enjoy reading the wisdom that exudes from this piece of poetry.