An Hour Given

a Haiku poem in 3 lines

I woke up to see,

a seasonal time change had,

an hour, given me.

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Haiku: Japanese poem of 17 syllables in 3 lines of 5, 7 & 5, 

including images of the natural world

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Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This reminded me of when our clocks went back a couple of weeks ago. We may have got an extra hour in bed and the mornings at the moment are lighter, but it's dark by late afternoon. Less light abd more dark doesn't make me a happy bunny :) Roll on spring. Spring is me.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Dear HappyBunny, you have within you the Spring to make light of Winter ...
Not bad, huh? If I were famous, these words might be quoted for hundreds of years to come ...sans the "HappyBunny." :D hahaha

[barleygirl]

Being a fan of rhyming, I always like to see it in haiku, too. Nice word painting. At this point in early November, I'm feeling hemmed in by darkness. I live in a ravine, so the sun is late to arrive & early to leave each day (((HUGS)))

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks bg!
...maybe, the flip-side of Hemmed-in can be Cozy. ...just sayin' :)

[barleygirl]

My claustrophobia showing . . .

[Dylan Macadham]

ah, but the flip-side of claustrophobia is ...
...oh hell, who am I to give advice? :) haha