Mysterious Ways ...

a Haiku poem in 3 lines

If I were a god,

mysterious, all my days,

I’d change my darn ways. 

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Haiku: Japanese poem of 17 syllables in 3 lines of 5, 7 & 5, 

traditionally including images of the natural world

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Author's Note

...Why the mystery ?

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, too much mystery is a pain in the backside. Show yourself, says I. Give us a little bit of encouragement. And that Dylan doesn't just apply to the Almighty. It applies to one or two men I have known in the real world,, who appear to be a bit on the reluctant
side to reveal anything about themselves. (maybe because they are up to no good) That is taking mystery too far. It turns from being attractive to plain old boring. Now look what you have done with a three liner:)Ha! Pandora's box has opened :) So much can be read into your lines. Well done you.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Hi Chris :)
Three main reasons a man doesn't reveal much about himself to women: (1) He inwardly considers himself a loser, (2) He is not very interesting and hence has nothing much to say,
(3) He is up to no good.
~The "strong, silent" types are usually (2)'s
Thanks for your nice words, pal :) ...yes I did want to open Pandora's box, but not toooo aggressively, which is why I wrote "darn ways" instead of "damn ways." ...don't want to overly piss off the "Born Agains," haha

[lessa (kenzie)]

very well written and said

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Alex :)