Elusive

A Poem by Dylan Macadham

Senryu!

Serious is Steel,

Silly, well-played, is Golden,

the blend, elusive.

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© 2025 Dylan Macadham

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Arundass TP

Well penned lines. Loved it

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1 Year Ago

Thanks Arrundass!

Soren

This one is easier. A great Haiku it is indeed a more elusive blend. And as a metaphor to achieve steel in a person is elusive as well it takes a special blend fired in a curcible of high heat.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

1 Year Ago

Well-said, Soren!
Thanks so much :)

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Added on January 2, 2025
Last Updated on January 2, 2025

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Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA

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