Beautiful People

Senryu!

Beautiful people

live by their own set of rules,

revoked in due time.

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Reviews

[redd Brick Keshner]

This poem elegantly expresses the idea that while some may temporarily escape the norms that bind all others, time brings a sense of balance and equality; that no one is immune to the passage of time or the eventual need to conform to a universal set of rules for living. Much enjoyed 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks Red Brick, that's exactly what I was trying to say!

[redd Brick Keshner]

Oh sweet! Feels good to nail it. Thanks for letting me know. Cheers 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊

[carl]

that's what happens when you make them up as you go = self revoking - and if you don't you become self revolting and nobody wants that. -carl

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks for your thoughts Carl. Interesting.