Waiting takes time ...

a Snippet, in 3 lines

While you are waiting

for something Fine to happen,

do something for Fun.

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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

Reviews

[Neilp]

This poem captures a simple yet uplifting message, reminding us to embrace joy in the present moment. Its brevity and playful tone make it both relatable and inspiring. Well done! Keep going!

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks so much Nelip, music to my ears! :)

[Fairy]

Your poem is good. It's short and understandable, Indeed waiting for something fine to happen need a lot waiting too.....

[Dylan Macadham]

Thanks, Fairy :)
Yes, life happens while we're waiting.

[Fairy]

☺️☺️ you're right...

[Dylan Macadham]

😊👍Happy Writing, I'll review you too ...

[Fairy]

Thankyou 🤗