'neath closed eyelids

'neath closed eyelids

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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a Snippet, in 3 lines ...

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Sunlight flickering 
through trees. Vivid Reds and Greens,
'neath closed eyelids seen.
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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Dylan Macadham
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this ia beautiful haiku. one that really speaks about nautre. i really feel the warmth of the sunlight and the coolness of the shde, sitting beneath a tree and lost in the moment. it's a feeling of zen; to be in that space. this is an authentic senryu.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much, EM, for your kind Review!



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this ia beautiful haiku. one that really speaks about nautre. i really feel the warmth of the sunlight and the coolness of the shde, sitting beneath a tree and lost in the moment. it's a feeling of zen; to be in that space. this is an authentic senryu.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much, EM, for your kind Review!

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Added on January 16, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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