S'plaing's a pain

S'plaing's a pain

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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a Snippet, in 3 lines ...

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Ever expecting
the effing unexpected
ain't easy to s'plain.
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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i liked the alliteration with the 'e' it gives this hard-edged work ridges.
long ago i gave up trying to reason with stupid people. i just sort of nod along and roll my eyes, that's bout it.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

12 Months Ago

haha, hard edges are good :)
... I've enough trouble trying to reason with myself, let alone .. read more
There is great word play here. Excellent.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

12 Months Ago

Gracias Thomas :)

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Added on January 16, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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Stringing seventeen syllables does one of my Snippets spin, count 'em :) more..