Loose lips ...

Loose lips ...

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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a Snippet, in 3 lines ...

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To Sailors: Beware!
Loose lips sink Relation Ships.
Best keep your tongue tied.
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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I'm saying nothing mate!
In youth, alcohol loosens lips but as we grow greyer snd greyer we have mostly learned by now to just think it and not say it.
No ones ever been to jail for thinking something, but as soon as its said, you are doomed!
😃

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

11 Months Ago

haha, remember that old song, Standin on the Corner? ... "Ya can't go to jail for what you're thinki.. read more



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I'm saying nothing mate!
In youth, alcohol loosens lips but as we grow greyer snd greyer we have mostly learned by now to just think it and not say it.
No ones ever been to jail for thinking something, but as soon as its said, you are doomed!
😃

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

11 Months Ago

haha, remember that old song, Standin on the Corner? ... "Ya can't go to jail for what you're thinki.. read more

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Added on January 24, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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