a TrumpDump: Screw thy Neighbors!
A Poem by Dylan Macadham
a Snide Snippet, in 3 lines ... 
Trade War
Screwing our Neighbors, Canada and Mexico, Screws the Bunch of us! ______________________
Will 25% Tariffs worsen Inflation all-round? Dah! Yeah! Ours and Theirs! You can bet Trump's Fat A*s on it!
In traditional Senryu/Haiku format
© 2025 Dylan Macadham
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It's great but.. Remember to make it for teens next time! Stop screwing the neighbors, Donald (Whoever it is)! :)
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
Btw it's "the", not "thy"....
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1 Year Ago
Thanks Martiya!
...not sure what you mean by make it for teens. Clicking Everyone includes Te.. read moreThanks Martiya!
...not sure what you mean by make it for teens. Clicking Everyone includes Teens, doesn't it?
...Thy is biblical, as in Love thy Neighbor.
I always appreciate your comments my friend! :)
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1 Year Ago
I mean, Everyone includes kids and above as well. Teens is for 13 and above and Mature is for 20 and.. read moreI mean, Everyone includes kids and above as well. Teens is for 13 and above and Mature is for 20 and above ( I guess ) , and the third last word in the haiku was kinda mature. So the audience should be changed to teen.
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1 Year Ago
Actually, super mature.
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1 Year Ago
...still not getting it my friend :) Are you saying I should change it to Mature or Teen? ...And alt.. read more...still not getting it my friend :) Are you saying I should change it to Mature or Teen? ...And althought you indicated "Bunch", I think you meant "Screws" ... which is a polite word for the one I didn't use 🙂🙃
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1 Year Ago
No, the haiku has the word A**, I think you should manage it and make the audience to mature instead.. read moreNo, the haiku has the word A**, I think you should manage it and make the audience to mature instead of teens so that young kids won't see this word.
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1 Year Ago
Morning Martiya, I think A** is ok for Everyone (which I always use for my Audience), but NOT the re.. read moreMorning Martiya, I think A** is ok for Everyone (which I always use for my Audience), but NOT the really bad words, they would be Mature. ...anyway, haha, the original definition of A** is "Donkey."
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1 Year Ago
Oh… Am I dirty minded?
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1 Year Ago
No, Martiya, you are not!😊
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Added on February 2, 2025
Last Updated on February 2, 2025
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Dylan MacadhamSeattle, WA
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Stringing seventeen syllables does one of my Snippets spin, count 'em :) more..
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