Gravity gets me down ...

a Snippet, in 3 lines ...

Life can make me frown,

but most of all, gosh darn it,

Gravity gets me down.

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:)

...forgive me the last line's 6-Syllable count😉

In traditional Senryu/Haiku format:)

Reviews

[Martiya Daman]

You could have just said, "Gravity drags" or "Gravity weighs"." 😆. 5 Syllables done, or I hope so! :)

For the actual Senryu, I think we are kind of right. We just want to fly, us kids. But without it, we will be floating and now we are in the sky 😊😅

[Martiya Daman]

Later you are on the moon :))))

[Dylan Macadham]

I felt the phrase "Gravity gets me down," was worth breaking the rules. ... Yeah, as a kid I often dreamed I was flying :)