Mixed Nuts!

Mixed Nuts!

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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Mixed Messages are
like an old can of mixed nuts,
tough to bite and chew.
.  .  .
...and yet quite supple,
nonetheless, opened or not.
And that's all I got ...
.  .  .
...except, I might add
I like them best uneaten,
and lightly salted.
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In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

...and now it's time to write off my nuts :)

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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Dylan, your one liners at the end of the write - "...and now it's time to write off my nuts :) " , are always fun to read and I enjoy them. You always got a way with your words.
Nice write on Mixed messages and nuts theme. You capture the essence through a analogy quite well, I too think they are best unopened or uneaten, before they may cause a mind or a stomach upset. lol. Thanks for sharing this fun write. enjoyed reading.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

Thanks AH! I gotta say I like your reviews :)
...and you're right about (salted) nuts, it's i.. read more



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Dylan, your one liners at the end of the write - "...and now it's time to write off my nuts :) " , are always fun to read and I enjoy them. You always got a way with your words.
Nice write on Mixed messages and nuts theme. You capture the essence through a analogy quite well, I too think they are best unopened or uneaten, before they may cause a mind or a stomach upset. lol. Thanks for sharing this fun write. enjoyed reading.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

Thanks AH! I gotta say I like your reviews :)
...and you're right about (salted) nuts, it's i.. read more

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Added on February 25, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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