Cracked!

Cracked!

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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Love--in Songs, Poems,
Stories, Plays, TV Romcoms,
and Silver Screen too!--
.  .  .
has through history,
scrambled and fried lots more minds
than the price of Eggs!
.  .  .
Our norms, they're cracking, 
our fragile shells they're breaking! 
The yoke is on us!
_________

In traditional Senryu/Haiku format

Corner grocers are selling their eggs single!
Singles are seducing each other with egg on their face!
Haha, maybe just a yoke now, but it might get you to first base!

© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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A good metaphor regarding our state of affairs in this country...I do think our minds are cracking from too much chaos...and the only thing that may keep us sane is son, movies, and anything that takes us into a world of unreality ....I like your humor with the cracked eggs....very clever write Dylan
Warmly, B

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

Thanks so much Betty! Yes UnReality is the best antidote to current so-called Reality😅
Betty Hermelee

10 Months Ago

agree! and always a pleasure!
warmly, B🌷🌷🌷🌷



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haha, this is another fun read. true, the Eggs have become so expensive, and hardly find them in stores these days. nice reading, Dylan. thanks.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

Thanks AH for another nice review :)
They want 6 bucks for a dozen eggs in my town. F*****g crazy. Good work.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

I felt so naive, not realizing til just recently what a big deal eggs are to folks! It seems eggs ar.. read more
A fun read that pokes fun at what needs a little more fun. Sad state of affairs that needs a little more attention. Well done

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

Thanks Soren! a thoughtfully rhyming Clever Review! :)
A good metaphor regarding our state of affairs in this country...I do think our minds are cracking from too much chaos...and the only thing that may keep us sane is son, movies, and anything that takes us into a world of unreality ....I like your humor with the cracked eggs....very clever write Dylan
Warmly, B

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

Thanks so much Betty! Yes UnReality is the best antidote to current so-called Reality😅
Betty Hermelee

10 Months Ago

agree! and always a pleasure!
warmly, B🌷🌷🌷🌷
Hi Dylan,
Trust is love for me
Adoration is love for me
Hope that comes true is US!

Amazing lines here you have shared.
I dont know what to say but wishing good for you! And it becomes good for me too.

Thank you,
Jessy Jacob.


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

Hi Jessy,
Thanks for your poetic Review,
and those well wishes from you! :)
ohh so amazingly lovely man
just yes amazing


Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

10 Months Ago

Gracias Destiny !

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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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