BRINK OF LIFE

BRINK OF LIFE

A Poem by Takaichi Tanaka
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The central idea of the poem "BRINK OF LIFE" revolves around the inevitability of aging and mortality. The speaker reflects on the physical and cognitive decline that accompanies old age.

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If the days should seem uplifting no more,

And with oldness, the juice of the arteries scantier

Mustn’t I know I should my timer tell

They’re numbered, and say ‘it’s enough’?

To fervor, do I the last constancy not intone?

For though I may the hands of the timer

Forcefully turn them backwards

When it’s the brink of life

Signs of age, flair, retreat to where they must:

Aural sense, memory and sight fail me often,

The clout of my limbs with increasing intensity

And recurrence, overtly leave me betrayed

And I soon dredge up, I am mortal!


© 2025 Takaichi Tanaka


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Added on December 18, 2025
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Takaichi Tanaka
Takaichi Tanaka

Blantyre, Southern , Malawi



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I am Takaichi Tanaka (pen name); a Malawian poet born 23rd March 1970 in Lilongwe, Malawi’s heartland and capital district. I hail from a small village called Chawantha-Misale found on the weste.. more..