reincarnation pet shop

A note to my readers
This is a rough draft for a book im writing "Reincarnation Pet Shop"
You should know I'm Dyslexic and although I do use spell check on everything( and I do mean everything) I still misspell words every now and then. I work very, VERY,VERY hard trying to make sure before I posted anything on this sight that my spelling is perfect.
But being Dyslexic no matter how hard I try some misspelled words still squeak by. Which is why I need feedback, if you see a word misspelled I missed pleases PLEASE!!!!! Tell me so I can fix it.