I love her

Just an urge I got from a very special someone

"I love her" this is the first thought of each morning
"I love her" this is my hope and my dream
Like a shining beam it comes to me "I love her" my entire body screams this message willing the world to know. "I love her"
I promised her always and forever so long as we were together.
Many people ask what do I see in her. I simply reply "I am hers and she is mine"
Of course we are not without our ups and downs, problems hunt us like hungry hounds.
We get through each day and no matter what I'm always aware "I love her"
If I had 1,000 words I couldn't tell her how I feel so I use three simple ones that contain all the complexity and confusion of what we call human emotion
"I love her"

Author's Note

This is my first time writing so constructive critism is appreciated

Reviews

[Giulia King]

A very beautiful poem! It's so sweet and well written

[Evan M.]

Thank you I'm glad its making an impact

[JoffytheRay]

This is beautiful, very nice piece

[Evan M.]

Glad you liked it and thank you for the review

[Deandra Dawn]

Writing is just an outlet to express how you are feeling without having to voice it. You did a beautiful job describing the feeling of love and what it means to you. Keep it up. Writing is a great outlet.

[Evan M.]

Thank you very much it really makes me glad I started

[Deandra Dawn]

You are very welcome