Missing you

Missing you

A Poem by Daffodil
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This poem has two different voices, alternating between each other.

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Here I am again, standing, waiting. The water comes in and goes out, just as you have all my life. I think back, and I dream of the days when we were together. My love for you burns brightly, passionately. As the sun sets I am immersed in its beauty, but I know nothing could ever be as beautiful as you.

Somehow I find the strength to get up, and get out. Down on the shore the waves gently roll in as the sun rises. I remember how you used to laugh and brighten the world with your smile. When I was down you picked me up. When we were apart you filled my heart. Now I am here again, wishing, waiting. You were the color of my life. All I can do now is dream, dream of you and the way you loved me.

You don’t get it man! She was everything to me! We were supposed to be together forever! This can’t be right.

I’m done! I can’t do this anymore! He was best thing in my life, and now, now I have nothing. This can’t be right.

© 2010 Daffodil


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great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really good. Love the emotion. Good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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