Poor Girl

quick poem i wrote in class

poor girl looks down at her feet
poor girl closes her eyes
poor girl opens her eyes

poor girl is not where she was
poor girl looks around with angst
poor girl does not understand

her world was so normal
her world made sense
her world was good

this world is different
this world is strange
this is not her world

her world was taken
by poor boy

poor boy is lost
poor boy is confused
poor boy cannot make up his mind

poor boy, where are you?
poor boy, won’t you stay?
poor boy, you are gone.

Reviews

[Valentine]

There is always someone out there we are searching for. Valentine

[Emily]

I loved it!
It makes we wonder what the boy did to her exactly.
Keep up the great work!!