Running away...

Running and running...

Running away from those tears..

Running away from all those fears..

Running away from that heart breaking past..

Running away. ...to take a new start...

Running and running...

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

I personally feel running away is useful :)
If you can be happy after that..
short and emotional poem :)
KEep writing!!

[Dakshta]

Thanks!! :)

[Akshat♥]

you are welcome :)

[Dakshta]

:)

[Akshat♥]

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very nicely penned...we all have our fears from which we keep running but however fast im running, i have to stop and read this nice poem,,

[Dakshta]

aww thanks so much :)

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welcome

[Nightfall]

Nice start...nicely written...i liked you this written...well...thinking what to say to ya....

Running away from the fears,
running away from my tears,
......
coming near ...oh...my dear,
i'm your dear, but you're my deer...

[Dakshta]

Haha Deer? :D

[Nightfall]

Deer means, Deer, who has four legs, one tail, two horns...lol....two eyes + beautiful sight...& one nose...one mouth...that's it......

wait....two ears too...& eat grass mostly....known as anyway, by the species called "A beautiful Animal"...i said by your writing.....take it positive ...girl...lol

[Dakshta]

Haha I know what dear means :D And actually I really like Deer :)

[Nightfall]

Really...!! may i ask about your figure,
is it zero or a slim-drim pearl...!!

[Dakshta]

Huh?

[Nightfall]

I meant...Deer has got slim figure amid animals...my dear + deer = don't b fear...!!