Blind side

This poem is about the darker side of love. Get this, I almost wrote a haiku by mistake I was pretty stoked.

She blinded me with love, left me wanting in her absence.

But the secrets that she kept left my mind in steady traffic.

Yellow lights turning red are a constant moral distraction.

Fleeting thoughts hard to bear are a cause of ones in action

Reviews

[Matthew Daalling]

Thank you so much beren. As always your critiques are much welcomed.

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I can highly understand the lots of emotions in this writing, anyone can because writer wrote in that way! I loved the traffic metaphor and the way of using lights and steady is majestic. In addition great quotes are involve in this beautiful poem… This is haunting and keeps a lover awake!