Tied Up

I'm all tied up

thinking about you,

I'm so locked up 

inside;

you're the only one

with the key,

the only one capable

of releasing me,

saving me from being alone

I'm all tied up

and silently going insane;

I get lonely,

my feelings turn blue

I need you baby

to untie me,

so I can show you 

my love 

Author's Note

Trying to get back to writing. What do you think?

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Hello Tasha, i am doing the same, trying to get back into writing .. I like it , it has a sing-song quality , sound .. it is strange how people can hold the key to our hearts so to say ... and how we feel they can release us from the ache..

[Tasha]

Hello Chloe, thank you so much for the review. I agree with you and that's why I wrote it. I was listening to the song "All tied up" by Robin Thicke and it hit me to write this. Thanks again.

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

My pleasure :) Robin is soulful .. keep writing my friend.

[Tasha]

Okay.

[Tanisha]

Great piece! You are a very good writer. I could feel the emotion with every word I was reading. Keep doing what your doing!!

[Tasha]

Thank you so much for the review Tanisha, it really means a lot!

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh to the point and I love the lock and key theme. The emotions come pouring out in each line of this poem.

[Tasha]

Thanks Poetic!!

[Marvin]

i thing you got back to writing on the right footing. great piece, precise and the message gets across

[Tasha]

Thank you so much Marvin!

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

Poignant, sweet; the feeling behind the words is definitely there.
It's got a good beat to it.

[Tasha]

Thanks for the review.

[Valentine]

Moving..as most sad love poems are..Valentien

[Tasha]

Thanks so much for the review Valentine!!