Uttered Words

Read Authors Note.

Smell so strong
Takes over the halls
What is this?
Smell so strong
Getting lightheaded
I can't think
Its just that bad
Uttering words
That don't make sense
Its like being high
For the first time

Author's Note

There's a weird smell in my school because their fixing something on the room. This is horrible I had to write something about it...hope we go home...

Reviews

[Tavionna]

you are good poet! its amazing how you write poetry based off your life. That its a huge leap into creativity in being a writer! Well, in my opioin i dont know if im write, but i believe true writers are the ones who write stuff based off what they see in life. or how they so much creativity and imagination. I think you are on a huge road to that. Also, you taught me another lesson on writing. Thanks for it! =)

[Tasha]

I'm glad I could help. :) Thank you very much for the compliment and review.

[Tavionna]

Your welcome=)

[Tracey C.]

I have experienced weird smells in my school, and i am pretty sure they were toxic; but the teachers acted as if everything was fine. Haha. Great job with this!

[Tasha]

That's exactly what happened! Haha thanks for the review.

[Tracey C.]

Haha, i don't get teachers.. And you are very welcome!

[Tasha]

Me either, at least I'm graduating this year. Thanks again :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes smells are can quite pungent and horrid.

[Tasha]

Yes it was and I felt sick.

[Poetic Beauty]

some fumes can make you feel quite ill

[Tasha]

Yes it did luckly they got rid of most of the fumes

[Ahmad Cox]

It might be a gas leak.

[Tasha]

It was and glue from fixing the roof.

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope the school closed down this room. Some odors are poison. Can mess up your insides. Thank you for sharing the interesting poetry.
Coyote

[Tasha]

Thank you very much Coyote, they are still trying to decide.