Dirty Flower

Hmm just felt like writing.

A lonely one
that keeps to herself
talks to no one
but its by choice
I may not be the prettiest flower
But I am me
I admit I've got some
Dirt on me
But its because of scars
That have yet
To be mended
Time,
Time you can't reset
Things you can't
Take back
A dirty flower
Sits alone
Waiting to be
Washed away
Of the pain

Author's Note

I know this is really different for me but just wanted to know your opinion. Thanks if you review.

Reviews

[runningturtle87]

Scars are the adornments we bring to the table, to the negotiation, the bedroom. They speak of experience, wisdom, and self-acceptance. Who doesn't have a few? Would you trust them? And then there is the rain...you bring up very intimate threads....

[Tasha]

Thank you very much

[EMMIE]

Oh, I love this! Very personal, relating, love the concept, very creative...I can go on and on. Great poem!

[Tasha]

Thank you so much it really means a lot.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Analogy of the lonely flower really does strongly portray the point....
it is superb :)

[Tasha]

Thanks Yas :)

[Sirius King]

emotional and sincere, i like it :-)

[Tasha]

Thank you :)

[Sirius King]

welcome :-)

[Tasha]

:-)

[Myenigma]

quite emotional, i like the methapor and word usage of flower and dirt.

[Tasha]

Thanks

[Fang]

i really like it ^^

[Tasha]

Thank you ^^

[Fang]

np

[Tasha]

:)

[DIVYA]

Along with the pain there's a lot of beauty I see hidden in your words. One thing only I would suggest...could you try to replace 'dirty' by another word more appropriate for flower? Like...say...'soiled' Otherwise leave it just as it is...its just beautiful..

[Tasha]

Thank you very much for the review and suggestion. I agree with you...I should come up with a better word. Thanks again!

[M Garcia]

I think this was really good. It flowed well and got your emotions and point across. Keep writing!

[Tasha]

Thank you very much. I will!