Love Letter

Every time I talk to you
I can't help but smile
whenever I'm feeling sad
you find a way to make me feel better
I'm writing this for you
so you can feel special,
just like you make me feel
so open this letter
so it can touch your heart
no matter the feelings,
we have for each other...
you'll know that I loved you

Author's Note

i think this could be longer.

Reviews

[Deck_As_Heck]

straight to the point i like it!

[Sel Whiteley]

A very poignant and emotive poem with a strong voice.

[LA Lorena]

If you can say what you want to, how you want to, in a short poem, why make it longer? You could pad it a bit, but that's just filler....why bother? There is no minimum requirement, if it feels right, just leave it as it is!

[Kathryn]

I wouldn't add to it. It is beautifully plain and simple like this, and really lifts the spirit of the reader.

[Aidz]

Sweet indeed and yes a tad longer

[fireblossom]

Sweet and loving. Well expressed.

[Fabric Pulse]

I don't know, sometimes the shortness of one makes it better.

[Joiedevivre]

beautiful thought for your friend!

[Lily Mae]

Sometimes mine are short and people question that but if it feels right to end it there then do.. then it's there job to pick up the dream or thought and run with it:) x Great write..x