Mind Games

I thought this was fun

The way you write
is so pleasing...
it has a secret meaning,
that only you and I can tell
because we are somewhat alike
and both share the same passion...
the passion to write
to everyone else that reads our writes,
thinks it's a mind game....
~ Or is it ? ~

Maybe you'll understand it

Author's Note

Should this be longer? Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the length of the poem. You made your point loud and clear. When two minds think a like. A great friendship can be built. A excellent poem. Writers do have a common bond. People who love words can always find something in common.
Coyote

[JUSTWRITING]

Short, simple, sweet and profound! Lovely poetry!

[Timtim]

i like it... the fact that you know the way the other person writes being unique only to you... Makes me think this poem has a hidden meaning, that only your friend knows, like an inside joke.

[tshigg]

A great expression of the commmon bond of writers. Writers for others as well as ourselves, desperately wanting to be understood and understand! I Like it just as it is!

[quinfinn]

i think that this poem says it all and doesn't need adding. very nice concept and cleverly written

[Yina]

So cute:) The picture just adds to it:)

[.......]

I like it alot, the meaning is there. So well said! nothing more needs to be said to get this point. Well writtena and said!

[Ravyne Hawke]

I think the length portrays perfectly what you are trying to convey. I really love the flow of this one, it rolls easily off the tongue. Great job!

[Melissa]

I think it should be longer, but I loved the beggining :)

[Jake Staffeld]

This is greatness :D

[lifesmith]

oh, I know how that feels. I've got quite a number of "friends" on here that I've got along with because we all like each others' writing