The Dance

I see you from across the room,
it's as if the music stopped
and there's no-one else
but me and you
you make your way
through the crowd
just to say hello... and...
"Can I have this dance"
I say yes
and it feels like I'm a princess
dancing on my tower
and you must be my prince
because I feel like I'm on
top of the world
we never say a word,
just dance,
and look into each others eyes

Oh how I loved the dance!

Author's Note

semi-formal 2011

Reviews

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

awww thats swee.. good write :)

[Katub]

perfect in words

[.......]

Such a wonderful sweet write, such a divine write!

[A.E. Surdam]

So reminds me of prom in my senior year. Memories. Beautiful, just beautiful. I enjoyed reading this.

[Hayley]

Magical, this dance.

[akapr17other]

I have a semi-formal dance coming up and I'm so excited! I love dressing up and going to dances. This poem really captured the moment when a cute guy asks you to dance and the emotion that comes with it. Good job :)

[Chloe]

This reminds me of the song, "Shall We Dance" from Anna and the King! I simply adore it and this poem to me, captures exactly the innocent beauty of two forms moving in a instinctual motion of passion!

[Allie :)]

Sounds like a dream :)
Live in the moment while you can, and while you're in it, tell yourself to make it memorable, because you're going to want to revisit it :D

[lifesmith]

I'm still waiting for my dance :(

[Lily Mae]

The magic of the dance.. beautifully written:) x