Could It Be?

My whole world use to revolve around you,
Everything you said,
I held onto with dear life,
Never taking anything lightly or for granted
I always took things literally rather than figuratively

Could it be...
I'm learning my place
In this mixed up world
We call our own?

Could it be...
I'm moving on with my life
And not letting the past
Determine my future?

Could it be...
I'm not losing sight of myself
For the peaty lies and games
You use to play

Could it be...
I've found the real me...
And it doesn't involve you

Author's Note

I'm not really sure why I wrote this.

Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Very inspirational, "move on with life" kind of piece. Great write!

[Alicia Hirshey]

I like this. It really spoke to me. It's almost like you read my emotions before you ever even knew them.

[Short.Nerd]

Nice!

[Aurora Lynn]

I liked the over-all theme that was put into this piece. Thank you for writing!

[Jenny Nelson]

Definitely see a thought process here. Nice sentiment, well worded.

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

beautiful keep it tight

[tigerclaw]

Gorgeous. Discovery of self is always a page turner.

[Poetic Beauty]

You can feel the person in this poem letting go and moving on with life and finding that it truly does not revolve around this person.

[.......]

So well said, that is the way to stand up to someone, never let anyone try to change you or bring you down. Love this!!!

[Amanda Rena]

i like it. i think we all go through this at some point in our lives.