You Proved To Me

old poem

You proved to me you can be sweet,
and more love-able  than before
You proved to me you can be faithful
and trustworthy too
You proved to me you changed
just because you love me
You proved to me you're the best thing that's ever happened to me
and I'll love you forever ......

Author's Note

part 2

Reviews

[Calypso]

Nice ending!

[lostboy]

ive said this before actions speak louder than words.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Happy ending, great write

[Ravyne Hawke]

Yay! Hope and love.. excellent!

[quinfinn]

ahh, nothing like a happy ending. this is the sweet part where he's now your sweetheart. i like this. it is very romantic. thank you for sharing!

[compositionc]

Awwwwhhh...this part is so cute!

[Janice Ann]

That is wonderful. My question though...what made you think this person wasn't these things in the first place? But it is wonderfully written and very sweet!

[A.E. Surdam]

Ah, so beautiful and romantic. Such bliss. Great job on constructing this magneficent poem. :)

[Lily Mae]

Very nice.. well written...xxx

[Aurora Lynn]

Nice! This was a good poem. I'm too tired to give a good, thoughtful review... good job.

~Aurora