I've Got An Appetite

I've got an appetite for you,
and all that you do;
the way you stroke my hair
and pull me close when I'm scared

I'm hungry for your love
I'm starving to be with you...
to kiss your lips,
to touch your face,
to smile into your eyes

My appetite for you
is growing in more ways
than you could ever believe
I care about you and no one else

I'm becoming ravenous of you
because you only need to be around me,
you curve my appetite...

Well only for a while...

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

It is simple and effective, using the metaphor of hunger and desire to portray and reflect the emotions you feel. The last line summing up that despite the passion you feel it doesn't matter if everything is perfect the hunger for more will still be there, I like it, it flows well

[Poetic Beauty]

This a very clear way to explain how you feel about someone. Hunger is a great way to describe a passionate need and the details have clarity that allows the reader to understand the emotions and see the scenes places on this page.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem of love and kindness. I like the kind and gentle desire of love in your words. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[shadow night]

i like it. the way you use hunger to describe the love for some one was geniuse i liked it and the last line few words yet it says there may be passion but you still hunger for mor. i like it your god keep it up.

[Tahna]

lovely lovely. I liked this poem, its really nice and I like how wanting someone is like being hungry and the last line made it!!

[Inyourshadow]

love the ending the line well only for a while ~ relating to food or kisses works for me.
To hunger for love is to experience the depths to which the heart can truly desire someone. I love the idea that you feed upon his kiss and his touch, so romantic. Keep em' coming

[gothicchica]

that was AAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG

[TJ]

Very good! Awesome portrayal of passion through the metaphor of hunger! They are similar aren't they? Both requiring quick, and messy satisfaction but both so temporary.
Good job

[LeaflessTree]

An addiction ;)

[Time.]

I love how well this flows together. Amazin write.