If Love Was A Currency

If love was a currency
you'd always be close to me
I would exchange every
penny I have to
express my love to you,
I wouldn't be frugal with you
I'd learn to save you
and only spend you
when I need you the most
I'd keep you in the bank
of my heart
with deposits  of hugs and kisses

Author's Note

somewhat cute.

Reviews

[Dimples87]

You're right, this is somewhat cute. I'm not trying to be hard on you or anything but your first two lines started off strong but it confused me a little when you said you'd "exchange every penny" -- I know what you mean but I wanted it to stay strong. I expected more. It could use a little more tweaking, though. I liked it, though nonetheless.

[Yina]

Aww that is soo cute an really sweet:):) I have no idea how you came up with that idea but I like it:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I felt it was you at your most savvy, a great little piece, fearless and bright, well done

[Madame]

very cute. lol, love the idea.

[Maya Storm]

This is so original... 'If Love Was A Currency' it's so beautiful... I really love the idea of this.

[unknown]

Just beautiful and sweet for that special someone.

[The fallen of innocence]

super cute and lovely, i rly liked it :3

[brenda]

this is cute and sweet great write !:)

[Fabian Franco]

Haha brilliant! Well the poem overall could be improved but as it is right now is still pretty good. The idea is very interesting.

[Dreamer<3]

Very cute. I like it.