My Secret Lover

Can you guess my lover?

A secret love
that's soon discovered
all because of the things
you do to me

You caress my legs
and let out a sweet
whisper in my ears

You wrap yourself
around me
and never let go

You hold me close
because you don't want
anyone to know
that you are my
secret lover...

I love how you've
kept your cover,
but not for long
you cute little kitty
you...

Charcoal  <3

Author's Note

Pyrokitty24 gave me the idea about a cat and this is about our neighborhood cat Charcoal. This is Charcoal in the picture.

Reviews

[temoralez]

Thoughts: I'd guess you are the lover, but interestingly I get the impression the point of view shifts from Charcoal to you. In the first 4 stanzas, it all sounds like Charcoal's point of view, but in the last few lines of the 5th stanza I get the feeling that it's from your point of view. I like this one especially since it's your interpretation of someone else's point of view.

Constructive Criticism: None, I liked the poem so much that there wasn't anything I could find to critic on it. The mystery of who is the lover draws my interest.

[VelvetRosetta]

Awwww I so love cats, I have two...lovely poem. =)

[Krystal Nicole]

So sweet!! I love cats!

[Victoria Scott]

awww so cute....(thinks about my secret lover to) adorable and well written :)

[FamaSemperVivat]

Sneakily adorable! I love cats, and you've pulled a quick one on us with this piece. It's sinfully delicious. A rare treat.

Really cute. Both the cat and the poem. lol :)

[Droll Prole]

awwww so cute! I love cats especially when they are still kittens.

[stars are far]

this is so sweet i loved it so much ...

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very sweet poem. Well done! I am not a cat person but this made me love cats. :)

[ivizarx]

enjoyed this :)
being a cat person myself

[Helpless]

this is very sensual and powerful! lovin it!