Early Morning Run In

For the Breakfast with OT contest

Some random guy just ran into me,
Then I realized it was OT
We sat down and talked
About anything and everything,
Some food came to us
Bacon,eggs, and toast
Such a yummy meal
But then OT said
"I guess I'll pick up the tab"
Not most guys do that you know,
I spilled hot coffee on him;
Not the smartest move when
You just meet someone
Instead of getting mad at me
We laughed about,
It was the best and unexpected
He's such a gentleman you know,
A couple more things spilled on him:
Orange juice,milk,doughnut,water,
All on his new suit...
That's not the best look
For your first day on the job...

Reviews

[Crowley]

Well I don't know about gentleman....but I could see him going to work on his first day in a suit with breakfast all over it, thats not reaching...lol. I am hoping OT wasn't an a*s after you spilled...I have heard sometimes he loses his temper, takes on a weird facila twitch and won't be right again for the rest of the week...Great poem, loved it.

[dreaming dame]

:) I like. It's something that will grasp your attention from the beginning to end. Just like all your writing. :) Keep it up! :)

[Nimbus Thread]

Great stuff. Like the ending, we all need that kind of attitude these days.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

lolz this was funny at the end, cute... fun write :)

[PyroKitty24]

Haha funny and well written~ I enjoyed it