Mirror Mirror

Someone's mirror.

Mirror mirror on the wall
Who's the greatest
Of them all?
It's her, she's the best
She doesn't need him
Even if he lies
In her face...
It doesn't work that way,
She's my best friend..
She will look in the mirror
And see that he doesn't know
What he's missing
So mirror mirror,
Please help her get her
Self esteem back
Because to her its broken
Just like her heart

Author's Note

This is for my friend and any girl that feels broken because of a guy. Trust me its not worth it.

Reviews

[Alskar]

I like the premise of this, the mirror mirror line. The message of these broken feelings is clear. I seem to be on a role of criticism today, though, so here goes. I've said this to quite a few writers on here, you shouldn't be too obvious with your wording. What sets a poem apart from another's is fresh ideas, perspectives and imagery. When one's goals and failures are splattered out so blatantly line by line in a poem, it lessens it's impact. However, as I say, you do very well in communicating the message of the girl's feelings.

[knightcall]

We all have to stay true to the person in the mirror.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very Nice Poem..and you are right ..no guy is ever worth that pain

[deeps]

I really loved this write, simply outstanding.

[panheadpigments]

I think it would have flowed better if it all rhymed. Ya know? the first phrase did, so I think the rest should have.

[DontBlink158]

If is over some lieing guy, there is no way in HELLo kittly land its worth it. It was a great poem, i really liked it.