Time Stood Still

Can time stand still forever?

You never saw her

For what she was,

You only saw her 

For her family's legacy

But when you got the chance 

To know her,

And talk to her

It was as if time stood still

All the doubts subsided,

The fears flew away

All you recognized her for

Was her beauty

And her charm,

You finally came to realize

That you love her

And want to spend 

The rest of your life

With her

As time stood still 

For all the days

Of your lives 

Author's Note

I wrote this after I read the book Texas Lawman.

Reviews

[crazybaby]

Aww this is truelly beautiful x you can feel the emotion hun:) x and you have a good story line about the woman. Rather deep and it makes me think of a setting in the past when you say about the family legacy etc. Really well written :) WELL DONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[lovejulez03]

Well done. Simple and nicely written. Thanks for sharing! :)

[Ian Faraway]

Short, simple, meaningful. J'adore.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great emotional piece. Enjoyed this.

[Mauricio Montoya]

as if one was looking outward instead of in.
Excellent write.

[blakjassy]

This is a lovely and sweet poem and really represents a pure and simple love!

[Quiana Shakia]

short and sweet very nice write :) "You never saw her For what she was," that line stood out the most because a lot of people don't actually "see" who they are on the inside, just what's on the outside.

[Max]

Absolutely beautiful!

[Bailey C. Writing]

Very pretty poem :) Falling in love is wonderful

[pia Z]

Hot! I'm not sure if you did this on purpose but the way the poem is written out kind of looks like an hour glass. Or am I a crazy person and I'm seeing what I want? Whatever! I like it! :)