Rainbowed Emotions

Colors of the rainbow... and some not in the rainbow.

Every second of the day

Evokes a different emotion,

A different way of living,

A different meaning of life

Red: confidence needed

to go through the day,

Orange: vitality with endurance

to keep me moving forward,

Yellow: wisdom and intellectual energy

to help get through life's toughest decisions,

Green: well being of myself and others,

Blue: youth in all forms that can be seen in,

Purple: royalty to myself and what I believe,

Indigo: meditation time everyone needs to be

at peace with themselves,

Pink: love and beauty that people need to see 

within themselves, 

White: purity in things we want to make of ourselves

Gray: maturity, time to grow up and become what

we're meant to be

My emotions are clear right after a storm

They shine bright

When everything  else use to be dark

Reviews

[Daytonight]

I like how you describe the colors but I couldn't read white at all and had a lot of trouble reading the yellow. Maybe you could put something about what those said in your author's notes to still keep what you wanted done with the poem and yet let the reader understand. Keep on penning.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

A very nice, colorful and different read. Nice colors, and enjoyable. I had no problem reading the colors, all I had to do was highlight over it. I enjoyed these lines:
"My emotions are clear right after a storm
They shine bright"
... nice ending.

[Light and ashes]

Great poem. My favorite stanza is the last one. It is strong and pulls the whole idea together.

[Chris]

Ta'Sha,

Well put rogether... and said.

Take care,
Chris

[Fragilebrokendreams]

very interesting in how you use colors of the rainbow to exhibit such deep meaning. Nice and original.

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I loved the way you conveyed emotion through color...it came out very nice. Only yellow and white were difficult to see but, the meaning behind your colors was great!

[Dreamer]

This is lovely ( though yellow is a bit difficult to read and white is near impossible). It is very creative and nicely thought out. I especially appreciate the positivity of your last stanza:)

[brenda]

pink! em pink! its my favorite color and i always do that lol:) nice
!:P

[The fallen of innocence]

GREAT JOB!!!!!! I LOVED THE FACT THAT U USED COLORS TO DEFINE EMOTIONS!!!!!