Watching Her

She should have turned away

She feels your presence on her

She slowly turns to find you

Watching her...

She quickly turns away,

Back to the party

But ponders the thought

Of why you're watching her

Its because of her smile

The way she carry's herself

You'd love to find someone like her,

Which is why your watching her..

To find out what she's like

Her favorite things...

Watching her

So you know when to make a move

When she's all alone

To go for the kill

Because girls like her

Are so easy to manipulate,

To make her think he wants her,

But he just wants her blood

To use as a shield 

Against all odds 

Because the princess's blood

Is what he needs...

To break the curse 

Author's Note

Different ending than I expected.
7/16/2011

Reviews

[Krystal Nicole]

very good write.

[Tasha]

Thanks for the review

[Krystal Nicole]

your welcome!!!:)

[Tasha]

:)

[DRD]

a stranger compilation than I've ever come across, but some how it works well together with the feel of the poem.

[Tasha]

Thank you for the review.

[Janice Ann]

Dark, mysterious! Good ending. Thanks for sharing.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Good job, nice ending. Great write.

[sugar]

oh i enjoyed this oneeeee, good job

[Katseye]

Good write... love the ending.

[sarah]

sounds like beauty and the beast, strong write and really interesting it held my attention from the first line. Great write!

[Gilbert Saint]

I thought it was a love poem but it turned out to be a poetic horror flick, like the twist.

[...]

That's how many guys are; not killers, but always looking at girl so wonderfully but with one real purpose in mind; to ruin her life or break her heart. Interesting read, nice ending.

[Kaylor Mason]

I like this one. It's interesting