Wipe Away

Life would be easier if you could wipe away things you don't like.

Wipe away my tear stained face,

The fear in my eyes when I look at you

Wipe away the pain in my heart

So the damage that has been done can subside

Wipe away the confusion in my mind

For ever doubting you

Putting all my insecurities on a windshield

While the wipers wipe them away

Its a thought that isn't needed,

It was just to drive me crazy

And it worked because I just want to take life's struggles

And wipe them away 

From my mind,

Body,

And spirit

♥♥♥

Author's Note

Dreamed about this earlier hope you like it.
Honest reviews please.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

I wish I had a giant winsheild whiper that I put into my ear and hear it wipeing away all the pain and anguish and hurt and hate and all the rest of the feelings and emotions that bring me down... Very well said and a good dream to have, kinda felt as if I was in it in this read...

[Pramod]

very nice poem i also some times feel like just cutting off those things that make life complex..really enjoyed :)

[Michael of Gilead]

I agree, line 7 doesn't work well....other than that it's good

[Roxi L]

Line 7 doesn't flow very well. I seriously want to do this will all of my mistakes and struggles because it seems that I can't remember anything, but them (and my important stuff of course). Very easly relatable.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[Caleb Pendleton]

Good word choice and topic, but some lines don't flow as well as others. Lines 4 and 7 in particular. I can only suggest reading them out loud and checking to see how well they roll of the tongue.

[brenda]

agree !:) love this poem :)

[Day Dreamer]

To be honest, I seriously want to do the same to all my mistakes and struggles just like how you want to in this poem. I understand completely about what you're trying to say and/or do here. I feel the same way. This was a wonderful poem and as usual it was very moving and easy to relate to. Keep writing! :)

[LA Lorena]

Life would be so much easier, but it's the hurdles and obstacles we face that help shape us into who we are.

Your writing has matured a great deal since I last read your work, and become softer and more flowing. good job!

I felt a sincere softness in your words, beautiful.

[Raven Starhawk]

Your artistic beauty is ever more appealing in these words.