Don't Hold Your Breath

I think you can figure it out.

Don't hold your breath for me,

Don't waste your time

It's over,

I'm done with you

Its too late to crawl back now,

It's too late to apologize

The damage has already been done

Don't hold your breath for me

Because your time was up 

When two became three,

If your going to do that

Then there's no point in me

Holding my breath for you

You lied,

You cheated,

You had your way

And now it's my turn to say...

"Don't hold your breath for me because I wouldn't want to see you pass-out"

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

i really liked the power in this and i can feel how angry and betrayed you must have been. however, i need to mention that you need to be careful of cliche's as upon reading the line "it's too late to apologize" i started singing "it's too laaaaaate" ahah :')

[Gitana Deneff]

i like the two became three phrase.

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice. Well written..xx

[TheElfPrincess]

I like the scenery in this, it's almost like a story within the poem. The writing is very good, well done.

[Lindsey]

I like this a lot it is well organized and written. I feel quite attacked to this story. Great work.

[Luciole]

that was really great, i loved this!

[~Juliette~]

Very nice piece. I especially love the last line. I can't to read more of your writing. :)

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Really really great write...You go girl. Standing up for yourself and setting boundaries is what it's all about with men. Always be yourself

[Kes]

Fab! I love it!
The last line made giggle. :)

[Tai Ryens]

Very nicely written, I like the flow of this one!

[Jibin]

Just amazing, simply and well done....