This Wall Shall Fall

Struggles crumbling down...

Every struggle,

Every test,

Is a piece that built this wall

But this wall shall fall

Because it's my turn

To feel accomplished,

My turn to feel superior

This wall shall crumble down

Along with all the heartache

And pain that put this wall together

All that I've had,

All that I've lost,

Is falling down like a glacier

Falling into a pile of misery

That I am no longer apart of

Because I

Tore

The 

Wall

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Author's Note

Thanks if you review.

Reviews

[Chantel]

Excellent piece, your determination is inspiring and your writing is amazing. Keep it up :)

[Andrew - Moon Fixer]

Very nice i love how you will never give up. and the wall finely fell.

[Pickleby Davies]

This is really amazing, a little haunting if you really read it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem of love. Sometime we fall down. But we must get up and never give up. Thank you for your always amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jake Staffeld]

The power of self belief is unmatched, even by the supposed power of love. With self confidence, you can truly change the world.

[Aidz]

Quite enjoyed the read and like the way u did the end

[dora]

you do have an awesome way with words, not only in expressing emotions but also in how you allign them
I love this poem, keep writing

[FallenWingz]

wow amazing, i like the end shape...i wrote a poem bout the wall coming down awhile back....

[rose with love]

great job as always, short with a big impulse, very inspiring. well done!