Our Story

What our story is...

Our story's been read

And its an official best seller,

A vibe picked up from ever reader

A connection that can't be explained

Our story is something everyone can

Relate to..

We started out as classmates

Then friends

Then a counsellor   to each other's problems

But once middle school graduation hit

We went our separate ways

And I haven't talked to you since...

Finally juniors in high school,

Almost finished..

I come home to find a message

From you saying

"Hey best friend I miss you,

We need to talk real soon"

It made me smile and cry

Because I thought your hung our friendship

Out to dry

Our story's just like a fairytale,

Only with a much more happy ending...

Author's Note

This is the second part to "There's more to it..."
Enjoy.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like this, I think a few typos possibly. I like the story within this. Graduation can feel like you have lost your best friend. I know that feeling all to well. Nice write and feelings.

[Art Sun]

isn't friendship grand...especially when you felt it was lost...nice work on this poem T'Shandra

[Daytonight]

I really enjoyed this. So fresh as the relationship grows. Keep on penning.

[Raven Starhawk]

Poetic beauty such as this is a lifetime worth of inspiration.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I can't wait for the next installment...but please don't tell me how the story ends.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-63ugCnPQ-M (the song by that title)

[Hoosier Belle]

i like it it's simple and wonderful

[K.C. Zbryk]

I like the simple folw of this piece and how it leads the reader through your past. the effect that the message had on you was perfect as well. Its always wonderful when a lost friend returns. I enjoyed this piece and think its a wonderful sequil

[MS. BABy]

this was really nice I am enjoying your growth...good morning