Just Another Prize

Inspired by Carrie Underwood's "Good Girl".

Why are you so blind?

Why don't you open your eyes?

Its just a matter of time

Before he leaves you out to dry

He's only going to break you heart;

You want a fairy tale ending

But his story's just beginning

You say he loves you

But he's in love with himself

Don't you see

You're just another prize

Or are you too blind

To release?

Please open your eyes

Before he leaves you all alone 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

good poem with real questions . I like the phrase ( fairy tale ending )
I thought the poem was good and the title is wonderful

[Eve]

You are way advanced for your years, what is the allure of the broken ones? perhaps it's our own ego that makes us believe we can save them. very powerful write!

[emman]

I like this..a sort of opening the eyes to see the reality :)